To: calex59
It says the bay bridge, there is only one bay bridge, besides it says highway 80 and 580, they are in CA. This is in Oakland, CA.I get it now. It goes back to my days in journalism. A story written like this - without the pertinent information in the first paragraph - would have been tossed on the floor and rewritten.
57 posted on
04/29/2007 7:25:43 AM PDT by
raybbr
(You think it's bad now - wait till the anchor babies start to vote.)
To: raybbr
I get it now. It goes back to my days in journalism. A story written like this - without the pertinent information in the first paragraph - would have been tossed on the floor and rewritten. *sigh* I'm just grateful that they haven't brought in the CO2 emissions from the fire. Yet.
67 posted on
04/29/2007 7:31:09 AM PDT by
null and void
(The truth. It is a beautiful and terrible thing, and should therefore be treated with great caution.)
To: raybbr
A story written like this - without the pertinent information in the first paragraph - would have been tossed on the floor and rewritten.This was written for local consumption. It says Bay Bridge in the first paragraph. Locals don't need to be told that is in California.
80 posted on
04/29/2007 7:47:09 AM PDT by
Right Wing Assault
("..this administration is planning a 'Right Wing Assault' on values and ideals.." - John Kerry)
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