Several minor mistakes in Richard McBeef. Certainly, he was not up to par for an English major, I would think. It seems rather surprising that he would be sailing toward his degree. OTOH, perhaps feedback of such failings only tightened the screws he felt upon himself.
His short play shows very shallow understanding of relationships, time, and what people would actually say to one another (in a real world?). His writing is quite, quite disturbed, but we have real proof that now, don't we?