Sounds good.
As to the headline: What's with this "undocumented" euphemism? "Illegal" is shorter, fair and gets right to the nub. "Undocumented" suggests that they, whoops!, just misplaced their DOCUMENTS and that all they need are some easily-obtained replacements. The lede's use of "unauthorized" is closer, but again, why not "illegal"? Is "rape" next going to be euphemized into "unauthorized sex"?
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