You make a few salient points.
However, the eye is drawn away from the message
by the numerous punctuation errors. This isn't high school text messaging, you know.
make no mistake your unenthusiastic view
Needs a comma.
destruction as a preventative to attack the new Terror war will result
Needs a comma.
Instead of Bush being a post 911 hero the MSM and liberals will ensure
Needs a comma.
Sponsor a new amendment to the constitution one that instills homosexual marriage
Needs a comma.
How old are you?
You see, the literate eye will be drawn to the errors and will tend to ignore the content.
I'm just saying.
LOL!!! The grammar police have arrived.