Not only is it sophomoric garbage, you you've broken all kinds of posting rules; you put this idiotic vanity in NEWS/Activism, you have posted fully spelled out obscenities and grisly details, and wasted great swaths of bandwidtdh.
If, after 20 years, this is the best you can do, burn it and never try to write anything ever again. I've read better stories written by a 12 year old.
239 posted on 08/17/2006 11:05:56 PM PDT by nopardons