I don't suppose you can incorporate the responses you've received on this thread into your story? If you do, and you choose to mention my character, Chena, please remember that I don't look a day over a sensual, fit, and drop-dead gorgeous 30 year old woman in spite of being 50 years old.
This was a fictional story, right? ;)
Thanks to your totally selfless reply, I am going to rename one of my female characters Chena. She will be 26 and a hottie.
Alas, she is the first victim.
lol... absolutely fictional
or science fiction?
*ducks*