All of us who grew up in the 40s, 50s, and 60s, more often surrounded by the smoke of our parents and others, were healthier than most kids are today. I mean, hasn't the incidence of childhood asthma been going up as the number of smokers has gone down?
Yes.
You're doing this all wrong.
You're supposed to use all caps and add a couple of "!!!!!", and use the word "FACTS" a lot.
That's the ticket.