[BeHoldAPaleHorse]

Your letter, unfortunately, resembles the stuff politicians receive from mental patients. If anybody saw it besides the staffer, it was probably the Capitol Police. Want to be taken seriously? Get Strunk & White's Elements of Style and follow it religiously. But you will now need to send it under an assumed name, because yours is now permanently in the Nut File.

[davidosborne]

thank you for your constructive critisim on my OPEN LETTER... I write many letters for many reasons.... this one was intended for DIRECT shock effect.... and I have recieved replies, and actually spoken personally to many officials, not just staffers... A letter is intended to communicate a message, and my message is clearly communicated in my letter.. if I wanted a pretty letter with elegant style I would have someone else write it for me with a stamped signature... but thanks for sharing your opinion...