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To: edmond246
May I suggest: "That right there establishes, in theory, that there could be more WMD out there for us, or the terrorists to find.

In place of: "That right there proves, in theory, that there could be more WMD out there for us, or the terrorists to find."

I'm nitpicking, but something isn't really 'proved' if it is "in theory".

10 posted on 06/29/2006 2:03:33 PM PDT by BenLurkin ("The entire remedy is with the people." - W. H. Harrison)
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Good points. I appreciate the feedback. Luckily I have an editor! But true, about the translations. I might make that my final article, at the begining of August. You never know, it might catch the eye of someone important. We all do what we can. Thanks again everyoen for your feedback


11 posted on 06/29/2006 2:06:10 PM PDT by edmond246 (God Bless America)
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