I liked your poem far better than the one above.
Thanks. I learned from Maya Angelou. I have an anthology coming out soon, called "I Know Why da Caged Bird Stinks". It contains my well-known work "Where da Mailman Wif My Welfare Check," as well as some other popular pieces in that genre, including "How's Come da Guvmunt Don't Do Sumthin'?" and "Gimme, Gimme, Jimmy." Plus there's some biting social commentary in "George Bush a Big Dummy" and "How's Come George Bush Don't Bring Me My Welfare Check?"
You can shoplift it at Borders or one of dem otha places. But stay away from Wal-Mart cuz they picked clean.