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To: Ol' Dan Tucker

See post 35 - my rant on the poor writing!


37 posted on 06/22/2006 10:02:33 AM PDT by MortMan (Trains stop at train stations. On my desk is a workstation...)
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To: MortMan
See post 35 - my rant on the poor writing!

I hate it when people sacrifice clarity for the sake of brevity. It would have been much clearer with the change of a single word:

Those probationary officers -- called PPOs in cop parlance -- have been fired by police Supt. Phil Cline.

38 posted on 06/22/2006 10:17:25 AM PDT by Ol' Dan Tucker (Karen Ryan reporting...)
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