[Jeff Head]

There was a lot more emotion in putting it together than I would have thought. Those events are still very close to the surface for me. Tell me what you think of the intro and epilogue in particular if you get a chance to read them.

[RobFromGa]

Looks pretty good to me Jeff, the third paragraph of the Intro would make a better lead, and the first two paragraphs at the end.

INTRO
This is the story of how rural western farmers and their supporters stood up against entrenched environmentalists, liberal politicians, appointed Federal judges, and agencies of the Federal Government…and prevailed.

[cyn]

"There was a lot more emotion in putting it together than I would have thought. Those events are still very close to the surface for me." ... best wishes as you get this wrapped up, Jeff. Ya'll take care.

Enjoy that snow :o) 'cuz we're sure enjoying not having any! I'm using my snowshovel to corral leaves these days! See you later.