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To: RobFromGa

I had it that way to begin with...but all of that, starting from that paragraph that you mention are also on the back cover of the book and I wanted to add a personal precursor on the inside. Should I just do away with that precursor?


11 posted on 01/27/2006 3:30:22 PM PST by Jeff Head (www.dragonsfuryseries.com)
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To: Jeff Head

Personally I think it weakens the importance of the event and you should just lead into it.

You could include a final paragraph briefly describing your involvement and how it happened, and end with the "The time has come for this author to tell that story. ".

Did you consider a stronger word than "Stand" like "Battle" or "Conflict" or "Struggle" or "Standoff" or "Encounter"?

16 posted on 01/27/2006 3:35:35 PM PST by RobFromGa (Polls are for people who can't think for themselves.)
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