This thereore makes them eminently qualified to run the state government...
Here's a prime example of "that" overload. Read this column, eliminating every "that", (except one I think, in the second paragraph), and you'll discover how aggravating these goober writers are. It reads so much better without "that" clutter. I don't know if this qualifies as "verbal acne", but it's driving me up the proverbial wall.
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