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New on the Wire: AP to Offer Two Leads for Some Stories
Editor and Publisher ^ | 03/16/05 | Joe Strupp

Posted on 03/16/2005 12:29:02 PM PST by Pikamax

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1 posted on 03/16/2005 12:29:02 PM PST by Pikamax
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http://poynter.org/forum/?id=misc

AP to offer alternative leads for some stories
3/16/2005 12:05:55 PM

[AP managing editor Mike Silverman's letter to clients]

Dear Managing Editor:

I'd like to call your attention to this advisory, which is moving on the
AP national wire this week. It describes a commitment on our part to regularly provide optional or alternative leads on major spot news stories, with the goal of helping give newspapers something fresh for readers who already have read the facts on the Web.

We welcome your feedback.

Sincerely,

Mike


EDITORS:

We are pleased to announce an initiative designed to enhance the value of the AP news report to your newspaper.

Its called the Optional Lead.

Many of you will already be familiar with it from the sports wire and may have noticed it appearing on national news wires occasionally during the past two months.

The concept is simple: On major spot stories _ especially when events
happen early in the day _ we will provide you with two versions to
choose between. One will be the traditional "straight lead" that leads with the main facts of what took place. The other will be the optional, an alternative approach that attempts to draw in the reader through
imagery, narrative devices, perspective or other creative means.

This initiative comes in response to what we've been hearing from many
editors _ that you need to be able to offer your readers something fresh
so they will want to pick up the newspaper and read a story, even though the facts have been splashed all over the Web and widely broadcast.

To further this goal, AP will NOT be moving these optional leads to our
Internet services. They are designed strictly for print.

Note that this is not an attempt to turn a hard news story into a feature. We will still present the main facts of what happened in the top few grafs of the optional. Following the alternative lead, the story will typically pick up into the body of the traditional lead. Here are a couple of recent examples from the wire:

Traditional:

WASHINGTON (AP) _ The Senate marched Wednesday toward passage of landmark legislation that would make it harder to erase medical bills,
credit card charges and other debts by declaring bankruptcy.

Democratic opponents made last-ditch attempts to soften the bill's
impact and restrict practices of the credit industry that they said were
especially hurting the poor.

Optional:

WASHINGTON (AP) _ Thousands of Americans could soon find it impossible to walk into bankruptcy courts and out of their debts.

Sometime this fall, that clean slate probably won't be available to them because of legislation long sought by credit card companies and banks, now headed for passage in the Senate.

Traditional:

MOSUL, Iraq (AP) _ A suicide attacker set off a bomb that tore through a funeral tent jammed with Shiite mourners Thursday, splattering blood and body parts over rows of overturned white plastic chairs. The attack, which killed 47 and wounded more than 100, came as Shiite and Kurdish politicians in Baghdad said they overcame a major stumbling block to forming a new coalition government.

Optional:

MOSUL, Iraq (AP) _ Yet again, almost as if scripted, a day of hope for a new, democratic Iraq turned into a day of tears as a bloody insurgent attack undercut a political step forward.

On Thursday, just as Shiite and Kurdish politicians in Baghdad were
telling reporters that they overcame a major stumbling block to forming
a new coalition government, a suicide attacker set off a bomb that tore
through a funeral tent jammed with Shiite mourners in the northern city
of Mosul.

We'll let you know through digests and "Eds:" notes on stories each day
which stories we plan to offer in two versions. And we'll always update
both versions of a story anytime there are significant developments
during the cycle.

We're eager to get feedback from you on this initiative. I look forward
to hearing from you with comments and suggestions.

Mike Silverman
AP Managing Editor


2 posted on 03/16/2005 12:30:23 PM PST by Pikamax
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Oh great, two threads for every AP story?


3 posted on 03/16/2005 12:30:50 PM PST by Flyer (That flight attendant is not missing playing below the bridge at this exact moment)
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To: Pikamax

Hmmm....I thought they were going to offer the right-wing and the left-wing version:

"Today, evil terrorists attacked innocent children...

"Today, gallant freedom fighters took action against vicious teenage thugs....


4 posted on 03/16/2005 12:31:40 PM PST by proxy_user
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AP: Now with twice the crap.


5 posted on 03/16/2005 12:32:00 PM PST by July 4th (A vacant lot cancelled out my vote for Bush.)
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To: Pikamax
The other will be the optional, an alternative approach that attempts to draw in the reader through imagery, narrative devices, perspective or other creative means.

Sigh.

6 posted on 03/16/2005 12:32:42 PM PST by mewzilla (Has CBS retracted the story yet?)
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Liberal or Extra-liberal.


7 posted on 03/16/2005 12:33:18 PM PST by Cogadh na Sith (--Scots Gaelic: "War or Peace...."--)
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To: Pikamax

Where's Hunter S Thompson when they needed him.


8 posted on 03/16/2005 12:34:26 PM PST by Borges
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To: Cogadh na Sith

That's what it looks like.


9 posted on 03/16/2005 12:35:10 PM PST by Knitting A Conundrum (Act Justly, Love Mercy, and Walk Humbly With God Micah 6:8)
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To: July 4th

LOL


10 posted on 03/16/2005 12:35:15 PM PST by Mr. K (I plan put my "Run Hillary Run" bumper sticker on the front of my car)
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To: Pikamax
I can help:

1. "In yet another example of the criminal, lying Bush administration's deliberate effort to oppress the entire world, the Iraqi parliament met for the first time today..."

2. "The Iraqi parliament met for the first time today in yet another example of the criminal, lying Bush administration's deliberate effort to oppress the entire world..."

11 posted on 03/16/2005 12:35:22 PM PST by Billthedrill
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"Yet again, almost as if scripted, a day of hope for a new, democratic Iraq turned into a day of tears as a bloody insurgent attack undercut a political step forward."

No bias there! /sarcasm

Sounds like they write bodice-rippers on the side...

12 posted on 03/16/2005 12:37:04 PM PST by LibFreeOrDie (How do you spell dynasty? P-A-T-R-I-O-T-S!)
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LOL!!!


13 posted on 03/16/2005 12:38:00 PM PST by Lekker 1 ("Airplanes are interesting toys, but of no military value"-Ferdinand Foch, French War College, 1911)
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Oh... So then we can choose between the standard left-wing, biased approach, and a biased, left-wing approach.


14 posted on 03/16/2005 12:41:15 PM PST by Redcloak (There is no "I" in team. But then again, there is no "us" in it either. There is "meat" however.)
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Guess just reporting the news, even as poorly as they did, was too confining, and didn't allow enough bias. This new format will not help.


15 posted on 03/16/2005 12:41:45 PM PST by gridlock (ELIMINATE PERVERSE INCENTIVES)
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16 posted on 03/16/2005 12:43:17 PM PST by Petronski (If 'Judge' Greer can kill Terri, who will be next?)
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Traditional AP lead:

WASHINGTON, D.C.-- Senator Edward M. Kennedy (D-MA) today courageously reiterated his intention to use the Senate's filibuster rules to prolong debate on President Bush's right-wing extremist judicial nominees.

Jazzed-up optional AP lead:

Worried about the looming American theocracy? Teddy's got your back. Massachusetts' senior Senator isn't about to let President Chimpy push his Nazi judges through the confirmation process.


17 posted on 03/16/2005 12:44:46 PM PST by Sloth (I don't post a lot of the threads you read; I make a lot of the threads you read better.)
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To: Cogadh na Sith
Liberal or Extra-liberal.

Yep. But on the bright side, it's a clear sign they know they're circling the drain. It's also an unintentional declaration of how they see their own purpose, and it sure isn't Reporting the Truth. When we've made it so hard for them to get away with having their own "facts," instead of announcing a policy of more careful adherence to simple reality, they announce a new policy of ramped-up color commentary and emotionally-charged language. Appealing to emotion, not logic.

This is an admission that they see their mission as not simply informing opinion, but SHAPING it.

18 posted on 03/16/2005 12:46:00 PM PST by TheSarce (Liberalism: The irrational, intolerant cult that dare not speak its name.)
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2 leads, eh?

Lead #1 - A lie

Lead #2 - A d**ned lie


19 posted on 03/16/2005 12:51:48 PM PST by Owl558 (Please excuse my spelling)
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Now the AP will provide two ways to dishonestly slant any story.


20 posted on 03/16/2005 12:56:34 PM PST by VRWCmember
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