[beyond the sea]

A grassroots organization comprised of some of the smartest minds in the law, business, politics, and media has officially launched its effort to end they tyranny

Is there any chance to change "they tyranny" to "the tyranny" in the first sentence? I hate to see a good cause lose meaning with a mistake like that. ;-)

[kingattax]

good catch.....hey beyond, can i get you to review all my contracts in the future ?....thanks :)

[mondonico]

While we're at it, how about changing "organization comprised of some of the smartest minds" to "organization composed of some of the smartest minds" or "organization comprising some of the smartest minds"?