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To: supercat

Supercats' Verse 3
VERSE 3:
The more one looks into this sad case,
the clearer the evil plot.
They're not trying to starve her because she's dying,
but rather because she's not.
Mike, Felos, and Greer are pushing this case
and fighting with all their might
Not_because Terri won't ever speak up,
But rather because she might.



Excellent verse. You've sure nailed it like it is. I can almost hearing it playing on the radio now. :) :)


2,121 posted on 03/04/2005 7:31:21 PM PST by Pepper777 (HINO - Why won't you LET the MEDIA SEE Terri?)
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To: Pepper777

Any musicians out there reading who can play this song in their gigs? All Across the country?


2,124 posted on 03/04/2005 7:35:59 PM PST by Freepertwo
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To: Pepper777
Excellent verse. You've sure nailed it like it is. I can almost hearing it playing on the radio now. :) :)

Glad you like it. I think I like the chorus more than any of the verses at the moment, though a couple lyrics need to be adjusted: line 4 replace "quite' with "so"; line 5 replace "though" with "but".

Otherwise, wonder if any of the people holding vigil would like to sing it once I finish ironing it out, or if anyone would like to record it?

2,125 posted on 03/04/2005 7:36:27 PM PST by supercat (For Florida officials to be free of the Albatross, they should let it fly away.)
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