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To: moog
"My super-secret decoder ring helps me indoctinate the kids I teach to learn how to read and write and other terrible things like working hard, having strong families, respecting others, obeying parents, etc. Maybe I should turn it off."

It is indoctrinate not indoctinate.
Your first sentence has more 25 words and is almost
illegible due to its run on.
It is completely unbalanced.
93 posted on 02/08/2005 2:14:05 AM PST by DaveTesla (You can fool some of the people some of the time......)
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To: DaveTesla

It is indoctrinate not indoctinate.
Your first sentence has more 25 words and is almost
illegible due to its run on.
It is completely unbalanced.

Ummm...that was a typo. A run-on sentence often has a lot of ands. That one is not a run-on sentence. As for being grammatically correct, you better look at your second sentence here.


98 posted on 02/08/2005 10:05:44 AM PST by moog
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