I appreciate the irony of someone criticizing something, letting the target and forum know that something appearing in the public arena will be criticized, and then using the English language so poorly that the author opens himself up to such a critique. Perhaps you do not appreciate the irony.
You want to point out where I used the English language poorly exactly? You sound like you are about to bust out bawling because I said your song sucked, you've posted like 10 times rantin' and a ravin'. Your whinging is as redundant as your parody song. Btw, a pop song is a different construct than a parody song. Of course you have repetition in a pop song, that's part of the formula. A parody is a different animal. If you realize that you'll write better comedy. Believe it or not, I actually get paid to write crap like this.