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To: Ernest_at_the_Beach
Battered oil prices have dived another dollar after weak U.S. jobs data deepened a slump driven by easing worries about winter supplies.

This is one of the worst-written opening paragraphs I've ever seen in a news article. What the heck does it mean?

Battered oil prices have dived another doller. So far, so good -- except, whatever happened to "dove," the correct past tense of dive. ("I dove into the water." Not, "I have dived into the water.")

...after weak U.S. jobs data deepened a slump... What slump? The oil prices drop? Is that really a "slump?" Lower costs of oil are good thing, right?

...a slump driven by easing worries... If worries are easing, why is this bad? What does the easing of worries about winter supplies (oil supplies, one presumes) have to do with weak U.S. jobs data?

...weak U.S. jobs data deepend a slump driven by easing worries... Ummmmm...yeah, whatever.

39 posted on 12/03/2004 10:28:33 AM PST by Wolfstar (Counting down the days to when the new White House puppy arrives.)
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To: Wolfstar

Where's the editor?

And this is from the UK ,....the home of the king's English.....


41 posted on 12/03/2004 10:42:02 AM PST by Ernest_at_the_Beach (A Proud member of Free Republic ~~The New Face of the Fourth Estate since 1996.)
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To: Wolfstar

I think they meant this:



Battered oil prices have dived another dollar (after weak U.S. jobs data deepened a slump) driven by easing worries about winter supplies.


Then again, who knows?


61 posted on 12/03/2004 2:01:29 PM PST by Petronski (I'm not always cranky.)
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