Posted on 10/16/2004 4:00:26 PM PDT by familyop
...good job! I like it. I did stumble on "balanced" in the following, though.
"Fox News is a respected media corporation, a respected news organization with a longtime balanced to conservative reporting history."
And you might want to take the word, "a" out of the following.
"If they say O’Reilly is a clean, nobody should doubt it."
But I like it.
Yours,
Sometimes Picky Amateur/Cheap Editor Dude.
Oh...assuming, that is, that you are going to publish it, have it published or send it to an editor. Otherwise, please disregard my edits and pardon me.
Hey! Thanks for the editorial eyeball! After a while, I see what I expect to see, and not what is actually there.
Yeah, I thought I'd send it in either to BOR or Fox.
Lets just remember who has control of these tapes, if they are allowed to be used. No doubt they will be edited to her advantage -- lawyers will take care of that. Would we ever hear "Bill call me back?" Doubtful.
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