An analysis of the original document that is longer than the originial would be more than 2500 pages. Now how many citizens do you think are going to read that? How can the voters stay educated on the issues when the governors office is purposely obfuscating them with a telephone book of changes to the California constitution?
The poster flies a Florida flag on their homepage. I don't think they are inclined to read the CPR.
I have read more than half of the 2500 pages. I found the recommendations amateur, the purported cost savings questionable and unsupported, and the reorganization implications troublesome. I think the analysis in the article you posted sums up many of those concerns quite well; thanks for posting it.