To: Mike Fieschko
If someone missed a couple of seconds, that first ad could seem like a Kerry endorsement!
Not too late to rewrite the narration -- and I think they should!
5 posted on
10/13/2004 12:59:38 PM PDT by
JennysCool
(Terrorism: Not a global test, John, but a pop quiz.)
To: JennysCool
If someone missed a couple of seconds, that first ad could seem like a Kerry endorsement! Not too late to rewrite the narration -- and I think they should!These ads clearly are not meant to be aired independently. They go together as a unit, and will likely be played in consecutive commercial breaks. I think it's a pretty effective technique, but hey, that's just my humble opinion.
I'm glad to hear they're going to be aired during Monday Night Football. I wonder if Al Michaels will have any comment about them.
26 posted on
10/13/2004 1:09:52 PM PDT by
mcg1969
To: JennysCool
they have come forward to talk about the John Kerry they know. Should be modified to say:
they have come forward to talk about the John Kerry they know, the man they know cannot be trusted.
32 posted on
10/13/2004 1:12:00 PM PDT by
Tennessean4Bush
(An optimist believes we live in the best of all possible worlds, a pessimist fears this is true.)
To: JennysCool
i agree - it seems unfinished...
To: JennysCool
Agreed. Number 2 is great, number one could use some work.
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