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To: Mr. Mojo
Twenty militants were killed in more than 10 hours of gunfights with security forces, 10 of them Arabs.

If you read the sentence the way it was written, the REAL problem here is that the Russians are putting Arabs in their security forces. Terrible idea.

Or, more likely I think, this is just another misplaced modifier, as employed by yet another illiterate journalist.

33 posted on 09/03/2004 2:32:37 PM PDT by SAJ (Have a very detailed look at writing CLV or CLX puts, 3.00-6.00 OOM (more for the X, naturally).)
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To: SAJ
Twenty militants were killed in more than 10 hours of gunfights with security forces, 10 of them Arabs.

Seems to me the sentence should read:

In more than 10 hours of gunfights with security forces, twenty militants were killed, 10 of them Arabs.

36 posted on 09/03/2004 2:36:17 PM PDT by Jaded ((Clothes make the man. Naked people have little or no influence on society. - Mark Twain))
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To: SAJ

Twenty militants were killed in more than 10 hours of gunfights with security forces, 10 of them Arabs.
If you read the sentence the way it was written, the REAL problem here is that the Russians are putting Arabs in their security forces. Terrible idea. ""

I read the sentence to say that "of the 20 militants that were killed, 10 of the militants were Arab". I don't read that the Russians had Arabs in their security forces. Am I wrong?


52 posted on 09/03/2004 3:00:36 PM PDT by ridesthemiles (ridesthemiles)
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