With the exception of singling out the klintons it sounded like his scriptwas a piece-meal of all the other scripts. and he didn't come off natural like Rudy. He could've mentioned that klinton never visited the families of the first tower bombings who lost people.He could've mentioned that klintoon in a speech in Joisey said that the first bombing was no big deal.
he didn't come off natural like Rudy
I think it was content that counted the most and what he said was excellant, he told it like it is.