Dead on!
Semper Fi!
Should I change anything? Someone told me the first paragraph sounded a little strange, maybe most people dont know Newtons 3rd law of energy: FOR EVEERY ACTION, THERE IS AN EQUAL AND OPPOSITE REACTION
I mean it to make the comment of the actions of Kerry had unintended consequences, such as the genocide caused by the North Vietnamese and Cambodians and others, when the original protests were for peace..
Was it confusing?