Thanks for the edits.
However, I was "aggresive" on purpose.
I know how to soft pedal, but there's too much of that going on.
If Arnold had simply called the CA legislature "cowards", you would never have heard about it.
By using the "girly-men" phrase he got attention AND results.
Understood--and I'm not trying to tell you how to write. It's jsut that the girlymen are the ones running McCain's office! :)
Thank you for your service.