Senator McCain,
What is it that you don't like about the Swiftboat Vet's advertisement?
Are you in a position to question ANYTHING those vets have to say about Kerry?
Are you upset that the ad is effective?
Did Kerry promise you a job if he's elected?
If you had been on any of those swiftboats working with Kerry, or in his command, wouldn't you feel qualified to assess his performance?
Do you approve of Kerry's behavior after returning from Vietnam?
Former USAF Sgt. 1971-1974
(46350)
Sincerely,
Laurence J.
The problem with your note is its slightly aggressive tone--folks in Senate offices turn off when they detect it.
If I may suggest a slight edit?
Senator McCain,
If you had been on any of those swiftboats working with Kerry, or in his command, wouldn't you feel qualified to assess his performance?
Do you approve of Kerry's behavior after returning from Vietnam?
Former USAF Sgt. 1971-1974
(46350)
Sincerely,
Laurence J.
You make the point bluntly without the stuff that would allow them to toss it in the "angry constituent" folder aka the trash.
Just a suggestion.