I'm not familiar with you, your publication or your writings. It appears from a read of the article referenced above that you write for a magazine. On this assumption, I will forgive the magazine format of the article - sorry, I believe in brevity. But can I ask, and understanding it is written in a magazine writing style, just how long should it take to get to the point?
Somewhere in there I am sure you did get around to your point. But you lost me before you finally did. You still have my curiosity, though. Can you tell me in a 30 word lead what it is you are trying to tell the reader in this article?