So, in a nutshell these are his five steps:
There are five steps in our plan to help Iraq achieve democracy and freedom:
The first of these steps will occur next month, when our coalition will transfer full sovereignty to a government of Iraqi citizens who will prepare the way for national elections.(June 30th)
The second step in the plan for Iraqi democracy is to help establish the stability and security that democracy requires.
The third step in the plan for Iraqi democracy is to continue rebuilding that nation's infrastructure so that a free Iraq can quickly gain economic independence and a better quality of life.
The fourth step in our plan is to enlist additional international support for Iraq's transition.
The fifth, and most important step is free national elections, to be held no later than next January.
He missed so many golden opportunities to ELABORATE on SUCCESSES that they've already had with these five steps that I feel it was a bomb of a speech.
People WANT SPECIFICS. How many hospitals or schools were reopened. Have some happy kids images in the backdrop (be creative) or something. SOMETHING that shows some POSITIVE emotion and GOOD progress.
This is only the first of six weekly speeches to educate the public on what is going on. The message will get out. But he was right, first step was to outline the plan.
As you know, very helpful summary of Mr. Bush's speech. I did not have the chance to watch the whole thing. Of the parts I heard, the man sure can deliver a speech. I get more confidence in our government just watching him.
To your other points: "ELABORATE on SUCCESSES" and provide specifics. I couldn't agree more. What better way to obtain even more support. Many of the Democrats opposed to the war would be enjoyably silenced when all the successes were described in detail.