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To: Pukin Dog
I do. It's simple-minded, and the sentences don't show much variety of construction. Nor does it have a good round vocabulary - note how the author keeps referring to "things." Definitely a teenager, saith the woman who taught English to teenagers.
52 posted on 04/04/2004 10:44:12 AM PDT by Xenalyte (in memory of James Edward Peck, my grandfather, who passed on 3/23/04)
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To: Xenalyte
I do. It's simple-minded, and the sentences don't show much variety of construction.

To me it sounds like it was written by an adult trying to pretend to be a 15 year old.

60 posted on 04/04/2004 10:56:32 AM PDT by FITZ
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