To: AmishDude
As a third rate, hack, amateur poet, I must respectfully disagree.
The flow of the lyrics is superb, like pouring water from a jar. It is pleasing to hear as well as read. It is anything but stilted, and certainly not forced.
It's actually quite good.
133 posted on
11/17/2003 4:34:03 PM PST by
Skooz
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To: Skooz
Better lyrics than the Steve Miller band. I may not be the walrus, but I know bad poetry when I read it.
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