Well written.
Horribly written. There are misspellings. There are inappropriate quotation marks. It rambles. There are insufficient paragraphs. He cites laws that are in some cases not laws at all. In other cases, he asserts laws that are not applicable. In still other cases, he asserts legal violations without providing any support for those assertions. As an attorney who allegedly received a scholarship to Yale, he should be embarrassed by it.