You’re still cutting each sentence in half???
And adding dementia trail off dots to each sentence?
Why do you do that?
Why snip EVERY sentence in half and post half sentences that no can read?
That is completely rude to your audience and is in effect saying “Heck with you!” (I’d use stronger language but Jim doesn’t want that. But really that is what you are saying when you take a pair of scissors to each and every sentence and then add demential trail-off dots to it so that each sentence makes no sense at all).
Also, for someone who fancies himself the “new Rush,” you never post any actual Rush songs. I’ve tried to help, but you could at least do some of the work. Here, let’s go with Limelight tonight.
Rush - Limelight (Official Music Video)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZiRuj2_czzw
Living on a lighted stage approaches the unreal
For those who think and feel
In touch with some reality beyond the gilded cage
Cast in this unlikely role, ill-equipped to act
With insufficient tact
One must put up barriers to keep oneself intact
Living in the limelight, the universal dream
For those who wish to see
Those who wish to be
Must put aside the alienation
Get on with the fascination
The real relation, the underlying theme
Living in a fish eye lens, caught in the camera eye
I have no heart to lie
I can’t pretend a stranger is a long-awaited friend
All the world’s indeed a stage and we are merely players
Performers and portrayers
Each anothers audience outside the gilded cage
Living in the limelight, the universal dream
For those who wish to see
Those who wish to be
Must put aside the alienation
Get on with the fascination
The real relation, the underlying theme
Living in the limelight, the universal dream
For those who wish to see
Those who wish to be
Must put aside the alienation
Get on with the fascination
The real relation, the underlying theme
The real relation, the underlying theme
Yeah baby, hello
Yeah, beautiful