[Deaf Smith]

And why were you arrested?

Missed that in your 1500 words

I did not count the words,but apparently you did.

Making a point should be brief and straight to the greviance .

Not filler to make a blog post.

Still could not figure how you scared the top cop with your "words".

[NobleFree]

Before I said a word to Daniel Andrews, I'd want to be sure I had the whole story - and the linked open letter does not give me that confidence. (Jesus, of course, would already know the whole story.)

[BDParrish]

I agree completely with two previous posters. It is not at all clear from your writing what happened, other than the emotions you feel about the situation (one night in jail in 2016?) which are quite clearly painful. It is not clear what you think should happen now.

Your blog is your writing assignment. Study to write well and you will do well. You are mistaken I suspect about who your audience actually may be, especially since you admit Andrews is not.

1. Know your audience. Imagine as you write your first draft, that you are talking to that one person who knows nothing.

2. Revise for brevity.

3. Revise again this time for emotional power and clarity.

4. Revise once again for simplicity.

5. Submit to proofreader and correct all errors.

6. Publish appropriately. How is your target audience going to even see this? Please remember that blog self-promotion is frowned upon here. Furthermore vanity posts should be accompanied by a generous contribution to the FReepathon!

Praying for your success there in your heroic effort to bring liberty of word and thought to your country. May God use you powerfully.

[Nifster]

Oh give ya s a hint

Don’t even recognize the name