[daniel1212]

I read it twice now. You may want to take a writing class

Or proof read, esp. due to my arthritic fingers. It is far from polished or concise, but what is it that you find hard to understand?

[for-q-clinton]

I understand that. I often have typos.

For me it was the structure and flow. Not sure what the point was. And what search was good or bad.