[Ancesthntr]

“Stephen Kroszt arrived near the meeting place first, more than an hour early, but Paige Lissat”

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Peter Strzok and Lisa Page. Maybe you should’ve called Kroskt “Pierre” instead? :>)

Wiseman = Weissman

Homey = Comey

Mullet = Muller

Adam Fisch = Schiff. Maybe should’ve been Fischit?

Brannigan = Brennan

“First Klepper, now McDare. What about Rosenblatt?” = Clapper, McCabe and Rosenstein.

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Geez, its almost like you pulled this from recent headlines. :>) Great story and, as usual, a great wake-up call and warning. Thanks.

[Travis McGee]

I didn’t want two first names starting with P in the dialogue, so Stephen instead of Paul. Pierre was never an option, I never even considered it, and today it would be confused with a Frenchman or Pierre Delecto.

Stephen also kept the cadence of two syllables first name, one last. It also meant a name beginning with S.

Paige Lissat reverses the order, 1-2 instead of 2-1.

[Betty Jane]

Maybe you should’ve called Kroskt “Pierre” instead? :>)

I was thinking use Richard for Peter because he’s a wiener either way