Posted on 01/24/2017 7:38:38 PM PST by Dan Baker
Thanks for your comments.
I think you’re correct about exclamation points. This is old advice. For the web especially, sprinkling some exclamation points around — if not done too much — is effective.
On the use of feminine pronouns, I do this occasionally and no one has complained. I would be curious to hear what others think about that.
I actually prefer to alternate “he” or “she” as opposed to using “they” when it’s a single person.
Cheers.
I think people will be surprised at the varied and well-written content in this book. It's not a boring course in writing at all.
Each chapter of the book stands on its own. And you learn about writing from many angles and in many situations.
I read this book twice many many years ago and may even have a copy somewhere around here. Finding it is a different matter. I remember particularly he said about the Chinese language. Do you remember what that was about?
Hi Mame,
Yes, I do remember the chapter on Chinese.
The point of that chapter is show how Chinese is stripped to the bone — no articles, no unnecessary words and (as I recall) no verbs/nouns, no verb forms, no weird idioms.
So an English sentence like:
A man will biting the dog.
In Chinese that would be:
Man bite dog tomorrow.
Now I remember point this chapter out to my daughter who learned Mandarin in college and she said it’s more or less true.
But I wouldn’t wish the Chinese language on anybody because of the tonal fluctuations you need to speak it. My daughter learned it and it was fun to listen to here speak it.
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