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To: dignitasnews

Here are three. The first one is worst because it comes early and is jarring. 

Latino and American citizens, whose are among the hardest hit by a surge...

Should be “who are”

Oakland Pedestrian Safety Project, summed up the drivers feeling...

Should be “driver’s feeling”

He went on to say that they so-called multicultural...

Should be “the so-called”


9 posted on 07/02/2014 2:55:44 PM PDT by ifinnegan
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To: ifinnegan

Got ‘em, thank you! Cant believe I missed those, particularly the first. I re-did part of the opening paragraph and didnt catch how that changed context of sentence.

THANK YOU!


10 posted on 07/02/2014 3:04:22 PM PDT by dignitasnews
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