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To: IronJack; arasina
He could cut this in half and still get his message across.

You must detest poetry.

this is an author who is clearly in love with his own voice

Having written over 3,000 unpaid blog articles I guess it is fair to assume he feels his work has value. Lucky for those of us that agree!

24 posted on 08/22/2012 7:24:46 AM PDT by expat1000
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To: expat1000

Poetry’s heart is its brevity. This guy cannot be accused of that.

I concede that his content is good ... the first dozen times he makes his point. It’s the second and third iterations that become tedious.

Just pare back the verbiage. Unless he’s getting paid by the word, it’s redundant.


30 posted on 08/22/2012 9:47:06 AM PDT by IronJack (=)
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