Pretty much sums up the quality of the letter. The guy didn't even know when he was hired for a job he had held for 5 (or is that 6) years.
OK, worked at Whole Foods for 5 plus years. Did she get promoted after all that time? Did she make a living? Apparently so to work there for that length of time. Now that she’s quit, good luck in finding another job. I’ve heard McDonalds is hiring.