Well I read through the rest of the replies. Someone else pointed out the hair and bunched up shirt...
As for complaints that no one believes a long time poster here at FR... Actually, it’s not worth the effort.
I was just rubbing it in, after all, YOU said you culd point out stuff right away!
LOL!
Who luvs ya baby!
And I dont blame you, anyways, no one who in power will do anything about it and the story itself sounds incredible, I have to admit, but, Even Barry was a young man once.
All the details fit. I was going to go back to see him again for the reasons I stated in the original letter, I guess that’s why I remember it.
And if I didn’t take a Literature and Comp class this semester, I would have never started to record it.