Yours is good as well. I think it might be slightly better because it says nothing about whether zer0bama would produce it.
An interesting scenario would be where the payout becomes so disparate that it works as a bounty like incentive for some enterprising attorneys to forum shop a judge that would sign such an order(even though it may be likely that he is overturned). It might happen at the State level difficult to get it done at the Federal level.
Before you do it you should 1. get x number of freepers to take a position. 2. Prepare a press release 3. Promote the hell out of it.