Is this a joke?? Is this a thesis for a master’s degree or higher? The professor who gave her a passing grade on it (if that is how they judge these things) should be fired. She doesn’t even come across as being above average. With that bad grammar and those misspellings she sounds like she is barely qualified for community college.
That’s when you bury a couple of knock knock jokes on a page just to test if they read the whole thing.
weighs it in hand, flips the binding, smells the paper, “yep, that seems about an A-”.
If I submitted writing that mangled in any of my military history classes, the professors probably would not even bother to mark it up and grade it.
Believe it or not, Mrs. Obambi was awarded some sort of departmental “honors” for this piece of embarrassing tripe.