No, it doesn't. Your interpretation of the instructions does not make sense to any reasonable person.
She is renewing an old passport, not amending, like changeing her name. The renewal requires that foreign citizen , such as Indonesians, be removed in the renewal process.
The removal of anyone from a passport would certainly be an amendment. It says right on the application form: "Amend to include (exclude) children".
Your interpretation makes no sense.
An amendment occurs prior to or after a renewal or issuance.
I don't amend a renewal on an insurance policy. I renew and drop or add coverage to the new term. She is in effect dropping coverage on something no longer covered. An Indonesian boy. She is not amending. She is renewing. It had to be recorded. And so it was.
Just wait, you are going to see similar examples from that office. Soebarka was adopted and became a citizen. Indonesia did not allow dual citizens.
Soebarkah was there at the sit down with SAD and the US consulate. The consulate gave him a lolly pop and asked Soebarkah if he would like to go to America. Soebarkah became enraged and spouted “Death to America! Death to Infidels! Allah Akbar!!”. That was the confirmation the consulate needed, and he then signs the renewal process with Soebarkah struck out as an alien. The record was established, Obama, not a US citizen.
No, it's obvious it was intended to record loss of citizenship. You will see. More documents with similar markings are coming.
The document specifically states that declared aliens are to be Struck out. Obama is Struck out.
The document is a renewal process, indicating Soebarkah is an Indonesian citizen. Soebarkah is an Indonesian. He may not be getting dropped. He is a Minor child of an American citizen that needs to travel with her, but he is being identified as an Indonesian by being struck out. This is pretty clear.