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To: Baraonda
Thanks!

That's only a small portion. I usually get one written every day. Here's one I haven't posted before.


Clouds

Soundless giants of the air,
Drifting slowly everywhere,
Softly flowing, gentle flight,
Unseen shadows in the night.

Summer skies of azure blue,
Often hold a cloud or two.
Snowbank castles looking down,
At the lowlifes on the ground.

In Winter skies they do convene,
To cover up our muddy scene.
Some ugliness just has to go,
So then they cover it with snow.

Grazing sheep of soundless tread,
Passing slowly overhead,
Our miasmas upward creep,
To make these gentle creatures weep.

NicknamedBob . . . . December 29, 2004

1,425 posted on 12/31/2004 9:31:58 PM PST by NicknamedBob (AuthorHouse.Com ... BookStore ... Hawthorne ..."Outlandish!"...Science Fiction? Farce? Marital Aid?)
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To: NicknamedBob

Amazing, that sounds so much like a Tolkein poem, it's scary. Same rhythm and rhym patterns.


1,427 posted on 12/31/2004 9:33:45 PM PST by Asphalt (Three can keep a secret if two are dead.)
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To: NicknamedBob

Bravo! Bravo!

I always wanted to be able to write poetry. The, talent, however, is not there. So, I appreciate people who write well.

Thanks


1,432 posted on 12/31/2004 9:36:34 PM PST by Baraonda (Demographic is destiny. Don't hire 3rd world illegal aliens nor support businesses that hire them.)
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