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To: Fedora

Okay. I was actually playing with haiku
& it decided it didn't want to be such.

The moon rises high in the midnight sky.
A vampire plays with unsuspecting prey.
He's got her in sight, she won't last the night.
Now she's in his arms, can't resist his charms.
His teeth sink in, told you he'd win.
She falls to the ground, no more blood to be found...
Dawn comes this way, time to hide away.


40,929 posted on 11/11/2004 9:55:55 PM PST by Darkchylde (Resistentialism - seemingly spiteful behavior manifested by inanimate objects)
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To: Darkchylde

So did that start off as a haiku and get changed?


40,938 posted on 11/11/2004 10:10:09 PM PST by Fedora
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