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Poems on the Eve of War
March 18th, 2003 | Sabertooth

Posted on 03/18/2003 10:55:54 AM PST by Sabertooth

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Timestream

Here… hush… In days like these, the soft din swells…
A silent voice resolves within the waves,
And epicentral, everywhere, it tells
Of currents and recurrence… wombs and graves.

Between the echoes under whispers, much
Is hidden, little heard, and some is dream.
Swift ears may sift true silences and touch
The babbling drift of time's relentless stream.

What mythic pool has this way overflown,
Precipitated from what endless deep?
What History engulfs all we have known,
And sweeps us to what certain, secret keep?

When memory and prophecy cohere,
They flood the tides that lap across our sphere.


II

Origins and Ends

Awareness to the surface realm is steep;
The broken waters mirror sacrifice.
Awakening from rems of liquid sleep,
Our daylight drops between the fire and ice.

As waters eddy 'round a stone in draught,
And ebon flows of void will sluice some matter,
So time will wake about a turn of thought…
So myth moves from a moment's gravid patter

What notes the light year where you'd find your star?
What marks true meaning of our time or place?
How do you know just where and when you are?
Dark origins and ends still ripple space.

By gravity and surge the clever steer…
The spiral to abyss is ever sheer.


III

Myth Within

Like vagabond ellipses planets trace,
The dancing sprites of ions shell their ova.
White dwarfs and blood red giants haunt our race…
What atom's eve might light a supernova?

Look through the shallow tension of modernity
And plumb the spinning depths down under time:
The quirks and quarks and shards of far eternity
All overwash the present pantomime.

Our conscience is a dream without a slumber,
Where chronons seep and stream from hidden wells.
Whose watch elapses ours without a number,
Where scrolling singularity indwells?

A clarity springs silently, and near.
True myth is drawn within us. Listen… Hear?






For the past year and a half I've been scribbling poems about the War and the Times in which we live. I've been flattered that some of you have enjoyed them, and I thought that, as we're about to fight for Civilization in the Cradle of Civilization, it might be opportune to collect them together.

May God bless America, our President and leaders, and our troops; may He guide our thoughts and keep us safe, and may He bring true peace to Israel and Jerusalem.






1 posted on 03/18/2003 10:55:54 AM PST by Sabertooth
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To: Victoria Delsoul; CheneyChick; vikingchick; Neuromancer; JohnHuang2; Grampa Dave; okimhere; DKNY; ..
((((((growl)))))



2 posted on 03/18/2003 10:58:29 AM PST by Sabertooth
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To: Sabertooth
I've been scribbling poems

no ...you write wonderful poetry....

Thank you for the ping...

May God bless America, our President and leaders, and our troops; may He guide our thoughts and keep us safe, and may He bring true peace to Israel and Jerusalem.

Amen.
3 posted on 03/18/2003 11:14:16 AM PST by firewalk
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To: Sabertooth; coteblanche; SAMWolf; bentfeather; grantswank; fish hawk; g'nad; funkywbr; ...
WOW. WOW.. Awesome writings!

This deserves a:



. . . POETRY BRIGADE PING . . .

Freep mail me if you want off my list

4 posted on 03/18/2003 11:18:59 AM PST by Johnny Gage (We will not tire, We will not falter, We will not fail. - President George W. Bush)
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To: Sabertooth
Art-lovers BTTT!
5 posted on 03/18/2003 11:28:21 AM PST by Nitro
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To: Sabertooth
Bing bang boom

Saddam be doomed.
6 posted on 03/18/2003 11:37:32 AM PST by ricpic
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To: Sabertooth
Let History warn well the still defiant:
The doomed will dare to rustle sleeping giants

Well said.

7 posted on 03/18/2003 11:43:01 AM PST by vikingchick
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To: Sabertooth; coteblanche; bentfeather; Victoria Delsoul; SAMWolf
By other jaws, her oryx lamb was met…
Isaiah's oracle is not quite yet.

I'm sure someone else is going to comment on the fact that you think you're just 'scribbling' stuff down. If you call this scribbling, I can't wait to see what you can come up with by relly trying!

HJ

8 posted on 03/18/2003 12:22:28 PM PST by HiJinx (WordSmith? Nah....)
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To: HiJinx
Preview, Preview, Preview!!!!

relly shoud be really...
9 posted on 03/18/2003 12:23:32 PM PST by HiJinx (WordSmith? Nah....)
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To: Sabertooth
Do I have the Courage

A woman has her head bashed and I stand and stare

A man is run over do I try to care

A child is torn apart by a rabid dog

What will move me to action what will move me

A house is torched and fire flies

A bomb explodes with a violent cry

A child is raped and I hear it die

What will move me to action what will move me

I've have a neighbor and I know he is making a bomb

I have other neighbors and they say leave it alone

I can stand it no more I cant stand it no more

I take action

I am praised by some and railed at by others

Life is ugly, Courage my son
10 posted on 03/18/2003 12:29:49 PM PST by funkywbr
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To: Sabertooth
Ya might think about submitting some of those to http://www.poetsforthewar.org
11 posted on 03/18/2003 12:35:56 PM PST by TheMidnightPoet
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To: Sabertooth
Ya also might want to think about coming over to the birthday party at the Belve: http://www.freerepublic.com/focus/chat/867439/posts?page=135

We can always use more poets.
12 posted on 03/18/2003 12:38:23 PM PST by TheMidnightPoet
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To: Sabertooth
Thanks for the ping 'Ol Toothy One ... great poems and graphics ... you make a difference ... good job!

Let's Roll!
13 posted on 03/18/2003 12:42:05 PM PST by blackie
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To: Sabertooth
Sometimes we wake up and the world is changed, And we perceive a glimmer of His plan.

I li-i-i-ke your scribblings! But the depths of feeling are too much to read at one sitting, so I will be back to read more tonight.

Thanks for the ping.

14 posted on 03/18/2003 1:09:02 PM PST by okimhere
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To: Sabertooth
um....could you kinda take me off your ping list, please?
15 posted on 03/18/2003 1:57:31 PM PST by 4mycountry ( Anyone can be average---it takes something special to be weird. I am honored to be weird.)
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To: Sabertooth
Sabertooth, thank you. Your gift is so awesome - and much appreciated on this night. The capacity of mankind to create - beyond chance or vanity - beauty, inspired by God...gifting others with a glimpse of grace...such a gift!

Thank you.

The Two Towers is a battle hymn.

Now, rebel clerics fan the flaming rabble.
And yet, the Bell of Hope chimes. God, we hear it
Above the evil death-cult's towering babble,
Ringing to our heart, our mind, our spirit.

So to our Towers our streaming faces turn,
Still standing on our bannered City's Hill--
As Root and Branch our enemies can't burn--
As Pen and Sword: the allies of our will.

For God and Country stand our righteous Towers.
The Two are not Jihad's. The Two are ours.

Amen.

16 posted on 03/18/2003 5:16:21 PM PST by Ragtime Cowgirl (They have to be carefully taught.)
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To: Sabertooth
Thank you so much for your beautiful poems!
17 posted on 03/18/2003 9:16:46 PM PST by Alamo-Girl
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To: Sabertooth
Sabertooth, you truly are a gifted writer. Thanks for sharing your inspiring poems.
18 posted on 03/18/2003 9:17:54 PM PST by WRhine
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To: Sabertooth; HiJinx
Love your poems, Saber. You are the best poet at FR.

I should also take this opportunity to thank you for the poems you wrote me. Thanks so much. Do you know I keep them on my profile page? Hehehe.

Thanks for the ping, Jinx.

19 posted on 03/18/2003 9:20:04 PM PST by Victoria Delsoul
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To: Victoria Delsoul
I'm glad you enjoyed them, Victoria. I enjoyed writing them for you. Thanks for you very generous comments.



20 posted on 03/18/2003 9:51:46 PM PST by Sabertooth
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