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The New Hobbit Hole

Posted on 03/14/2002 5:07:26 AM PST by HairOfTheDog

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To: Corin Stormhands
Or he could work to bring a mega-company to town and put the small owners out of business...

Now THAT's a subject I really could NOT write about. Too close to home! Only the opposite happened. My town had a chance to bring a Wal-mart here, but MA liberal refugees told them to take their Wal-Mart and shove it, 'cause it would hurt the small businesses. Bull...stuff.

Wal-Mart went across the river to NH where they don't have so many rules about companies that no companies wanna stay here. All the small businesses followed it, because people come from miles and miles around to go to Wal-Mart. My town used to be booming...now there are empty stores all along the main street and the jobs just keep leaving. I'm probably going to have to get a job in NH (not that it breaks my heart any)...there aren't any here.

38,541 posted on 11/01/2002 1:05:59 PM PST by RosieCotton
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To: Corin Stormhands
You know what surprises me... how little most students care about the grades they get. I want to get into a graduate program in a certain university on the East Coast. That graduate program takes only 20 students a year. That's all. Grade point average is so important. Yet, this is what I hear... "I don't care about said subject, so I didn't study." or "I got a B-, good enough." "No, I didn't study... I can BS my way through any essay question."

Now, if I have done my best and end up with a B- that's one thing, but to spend so much money and sacrifice time away from other things... and just give it half a try... that's not me.

Yet, to conform, that's what I will have to do. Where it all is going to pay off is when I get in the graduate program... then I'll be glad Smeagol has good retention.

38,542 posted on 11/01/2002 1:06:27 PM PST by carton253
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To: RosieCotton
I'm not s'posed to say it on FR, but Wal-Mart is a good company. They treated my wife very well.
38,543 posted on 11/01/2002 1:08:37 PM PST by Corin Stormhands
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To: carton253
You know what surprises me... how little most students care about the grades they get.

We are constantly fighting that with our 13-year-old. One of these days he's going to realize his choice is the local community college because he doesn't have the grades to get into Virginia Tech...

38,544 posted on 11/01/2002 1:10:16 PM PST by Corin Stormhands
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To: Corin Stormhands
I'm not s'posed to say it on FR, but Wal-Mart is a good company. They treated my wife very well.

Yeah, I've heard they're a pretty good employer. And they brought a TON of jobs to that town, though not of the sort I'm looking for!

It's just sad seeing what's left of this town and seeing how that town has grown in the last few years. We're almost a sleeper town for Littleton these days.

Just read my initial post on this subject...man...and I think I can write a story? I guess I got too hot and bothered to use proper grammar...

Tom is still moping. I need to invent a character to kick him in the pants. However, I almost have my days quota as far as word count goes. Yay!

38,545 posted on 11/01/2002 1:13:03 PM PST by RosieCotton
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To: Corin Stormhands
That was my past. I am in a job I don't really like because I didn't care about grades in high-school. Now, I realize how important it is. It's okay that the students tease me... that's not what upset me this week. It's when the teachers reproach or rebuke me for doing well.
38,546 posted on 11/01/2002 1:13:24 PM PST by carton253
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To: RosieCotton
Rosie... if you hate your character change him or give a good reason for being like that. The secret of writing is in the rewriting. If you get half way through the novel and something happens that gives you a new way of plotting, it pays to go back and redo it. I'm not much of a writer. I write plays mostly. I have rewritten characters all the time.

Don't be stuck with Tom if you aren't happy with him.

38,547 posted on 11/01/2002 1:15:49 PM PST by carton253
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To: carton253; RosieCotton
The secret of writing is in the rewriting...

Not with NaNoWriMo. The secret here is in the volume of words. 50,000 in one month. Rewrites come later, otherwise we'll never make the finish line.

Here's a thought Rosie: Give him a life changing event. Kill off someone he loves, give him a disease or disability to work through. Make the experience change his attitude.

Don't be afraid to let the book follow a different path than what is in your outline.

38,548 posted on 11/01/2002 1:19:10 PM PST by Corin Stormhands
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To: carton253
Can't rewrite...that's part of the point of this challenge. You know what we're all talking about, right? NaNoMoWri? And I guess I don't really HATE him...I'll just like him better later in the story when he's had more of a chance to prove himself. Right now he's depressed, and with good reason...but it's making ME depressed. ;-)

I'll shut up about him now. I have nothing else to do but write and post this afternoon, so I'm whining...

38,549 posted on 11/01/2002 1:20:04 PM PST by RosieCotton
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To: Corin Stormhands; RosieCotton
Got it! I didn't understand the rules.
38,550 posted on 11/01/2002 1:21:39 PM PST by carton253
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To: Corin Stormhands
I WILL get the name of this challenge right some day...
38,551 posted on 11/01/2002 1:22:34 PM PST by RosieCotton
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To: RosieCotton
I feel for you! But, change him as soon as you can otherwise you might not want to finish the story. Don't worry about whining. It's okay...
38,552 posted on 11/01/2002 1:22:39 PM PST by carton253
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To: carton253; RosieCotton; Corin Stormhands; g'nad; HairOfTheDog; Overtaxed; JenB
Elrond's first try at using an internet bulletin board:


38,553 posted on 11/01/2002 1:23:38 PM PST by ksen
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Smeagol is going home!

This weekend, must rewrite English essay... write new essay for English. Start paper for American Government 1... and write 6 minute speech that has visual aids. Study for Arabic test tomorrow morning... study both Arabic and Hebrew. Yikes! I'm tired just writing that!

38,554 posted on 11/01/2002 1:24:30 PM PST by carton253
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To: ksen
Are you sure that's not dwarvish script?

I think elves use things like calligraphy pens, not crayons...

38,555 posted on 11/01/2002 1:24:49 PM PST by RosieCotton
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To: carton253
I feel for you! But, change him as soon as you can otherwise you might not want to finish the story.

Luckily he's not my only "main" character. So I just have to write his introduction. Then by the next time he comes into the story, things have already changed somewhat and he's not such a lump.

I can always work on other chapters and come back to him, too.

38,556 posted on 11/01/2002 1:26:42 PM PST by RosieCotton
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To: RosieCotton
I WILL get the name of this challenge right some day...

No editing. You'll have to work at getting it write in your next whine, um...post...;-)

38,557 posted on 11/01/2002 1:28:41 PM PST by Corin Stormhands
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To: Corin Stormhands
Hey! We'll all probably be whining in a few weeks! I'm just ahead of the game 'cause I'm unemployed and have had more time to write!
38,558 posted on 11/01/2002 1:30:09 PM PST by RosieCotton
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To: RosieCotton
I think elves use things like calligraphy pens, not crayons...

That's just what their PR guys want you to think.

38,559 posted on 11/01/2002 1:30:48 PM PST by ksen
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To: RosieCotton; ksen; g'nad; rightwingreligiousfanatic
Are you sure that's not dwarvish script?

Rosie! Is that the thanks I get for being nice to you today?

38,560 posted on 11/01/2002 1:32:26 PM PST by Corin Stormhands
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