After you pointing it out,I did and I found no problem with it.
But then again, I'm not an anal retentive grammar cuck.
This child is supposedly graduating from some 2 year community college AND she has applied to Stanford,as well as other 4 year colleges.
Her grammar, syntax, and abject lack of even an average 10 year old's vocabulary is appalling; not to mention NOT even at the fifth grade level, where normal kids her age are.
Your reply beggars the imagination!